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Brooklyn Crane's avatar

I actually quite enjoy the fact you bent the form to fit what you had in mind while style retaining the rhyme, spirit and length of quatrains. Then you made it use anaphora (repeating a word on every first line or clause) and came up with something truly yours.

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I love the way it builds, using all the 'nevers' to tell its tale.

Flows and reads nicely, too.

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